Thursday, 25 October 2012

WALT: Write detailed descriptions!

We have been learning how to write good descriptions so our readers can picture our stories in their heads. 
We wrote a description of one of the toys in our class. We tried to include all the important details. 
When we had finished we sent our description to the children of Room 4. (Click on their name to view their blog)
They were adventurous and accepted the challenge to try and picture our description in their heads and to draw a picture showing what they are thinking. 

This is the description we wrote: 

Wow! Check out the amazing visualising Room 4 did! (Click on the photo to see it bigger)
 We are very proud of our writing and the great work Room 4 did too! 

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